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Report on generating creativity

A bit ago I blogged about generating creativity and the book A Technique for Producing Ideas, by James Webb Young.

I haven’t yet started using the index cards to jot down observations from in-depth research of what my characters do for a living. file0001601824864I’ve been deeply absorbed in The Plot Thickens, by Noah Lukeman, from  which I’ve developed worksheets. I’m now applying those to my characters. It’s hard work. I like that the worksheets derived from Lukeman’s book are facilitating deep thinking about the characters. When I come to a trait or bit of background that I’ve checked as yes, the character has this, sometimes I have to think a long time about the circumstances that made that happen or the effects of that trait. And this is starting to bring scenes from the character’s life into focus. These bits are like puzzle pieces and these are starting to form a mosaic of the character’s life.

I guess these worksheets are part of my in-depth research for the book, so instead of index cards I have spreadsheets, spreadsheetat least for this part of the research.

I have started the scrapbook, which is for capturing interesting things from each day’s reading or just living, things that inspire me in some way as well as just spontaneous ideas I have on my own. This has been good.

I do so much of my reading online now, but I figured out the equivalent of cutting articles out of newspapers. When I read something online that is interesting, I print it out and paste it in my scrapbook. P1010049If it’s an image, I print that too. My new creativity journal, a Christmas gift from one of my critique partners, has blank pages on the right side, and lined paper on the left, which encourages me to write but also to draw and paste.

I’ve kept tons of journals, but I’m going to index and cross-index this one, as suggested in A Technique for Generating Ideas. I’ve been getting a lot of ideas beyond the scope of my work-in-progress from the in-depth application of The Plot Thickens. Just creating the worksheets has made ideas for short stories pop into my head. Also I’ve had ideas for how to tackle a rewrite of a big novel I wrote a while back that has been beyond me to figure out how to revise and sell. I’ve jotted these in my journal/scrapbook. I might even go back to old journals I kept when writing that book and index the notes there.

What I’m really doing here is embracing how I really am instead of criticizing myself for not being like how I think creative writers should be. This idea of being very disciplined and methodical about thinking appeals to me so much, and the approach is working because it suits my basic personality.

I’ve quadrupled my reading goals this year and am active in two groups in Goodreads. This is also feeding my writing. I recently figured out what makes a book amazing to me, and different ways a book falls short for me. My instincts told me that by really applying The Plot Thickens, I would gain access to making my books more like the books that amaze me.

Time for a pretty picture. Here’s something I toyed with tonight.

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Have a great week!

5 ways to set new years goals

So as not to overwhelm yourself, look at the big picture and keep it simple. Make sure you get big things done. We need to protect our big things against the tide of small things, which we tend to do because they are smaller, easier to accomplish. Think about what big things will make you feel the most fulfilled at the end of the year.

  1. Choose no more than three large projects. For example: Market <book that is coming out>, Complete <work-in-progress A>, Write <planned-project B>. Don’t even bother putting down the next steps about getting them sold, marketed or whatever. (I’ll show you what to do with those steps on Monday when I revisit our project management discussion.)
  2. For routine maintenance items, keep the list to three important ones. For example, maintain my marketing efforts: blog, facebook, newsletter.
  3. Keep most of your personal goals separate, and keep them simple.
  4. Create development goals. For example, improve my writing by doing the exercises in Make Your Words Work by Gary Provost and by reading 100 novels. Again, choose no more than three.
  5. For your three big projects, break them into steps. Look at your calendar, which should also reflect things like planned vacations, conferences, and so on, so that you can get a realistic idea of when you can accomplish the projects. Be sure to build in some slack in the schedule. If you think it will take 3 months, give it four. Work on the projects one at a time if possible. Put all your projects on a big piece of paper with the steps as boxes so you can check them off, and so that when you have to set one aside to work on another, (which counts as working on one at a time), when you return to the original project, you can quickly see where you are on the other project. I’ll go over this big-piece-of-paper concept again on Monday.

If you complete your big projects before the end of the year, then you can make more goals.

For 2015, my big project accomplishments were:

  • Finished and started querying Mark Taggart and the Circle of Stones
  • Wrote and submitted Third Strike’s the Charm.
  • Edited, formatted, and published Heartland.

I didn’t write two other books I wanted to write, but that’s okay. I’m still getting the hang of my process. But I want to get to the point that I complete my goals. It’s okay to abandon some goals and make new ones within the year, but I want to accomplish the number of big projects that I set out to do.

I used the second half of December to read, think, and to work on the tools that will help me get where I want to go with my writing.

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I’m enjoying my process, and I’m not working under contract. (With Wild Rose Press, authors enter the contract after the book is written, not before.)

What are you looking forward to accomplishing this year?

Before you go, I’ve been working on this photo. Which do you prefer?

The writing life, generating creativity

Happy Monday! 

2GH7hkY5I want to share with you the long and winding exploration in which I’ve indulged during the magical cold days of December, days that somehow lend themselves to introspection, giving the psyche time to go deep like the dormant trees doing whatever it is they do to prepare themselves to leaf out in the spring.

This exploration  all started when I read my friend Gayle Parness‘ debut novel Rebirth (Rogues Shifter Series 1). She has a dozen or so books out, and she gave me the audio book of the first one, which starts the series. Rebirth brims with imagination and gorgeously rich language not to mention brilliant characterization, snappy dialogue and good plotting. But it’s the brimming imagination that triggered a negative thought about myself as a writer.

When something happens to make me doubt myself as a writer, I am all over it. I am a disciple of Eric Maisel, my go-to writer for all the baggage that goes with being an artist. Because I’m a “self-coach,” as he teaches, I know when I am having a self-defeating thought about writing, and I get on that. Not to deny it, but to examine it and understand the thought so that I can then dispute it.

First the examination. It is a known self-defeating action to compare oneself to other writers. However, if we have the solid anchor of being a creativity self coach and know that we are not going to let the self-defeating part take root, it can be a useful exercise. I do have this creativity self coach thing down now, so let’s take a look.

Author at workUnlike Gayle, who is prolific, I am a lean writer. With my debut novel, my newly assigned editor said, “This could be a lot longer.” I said, “I know. I write lean. I don’t know why, but no matter how much I try, that is what I do.” She said, “It’s your style. Most authors throw everything on the page and I have to sort through it.” I felt lots better. This leanness is just my style.

However, I want to do more, much more.

As I was examining this comparison of myself to Gayle, I thought, I’m semi-scientific. I say semi-scientific as I like to dwell on the fringes of science; I am not myself a disciplined scientist. In my previous career, I was a senior technical writer, a role that is on the border of the engineer the IT professional and the written word. Nothing in my life has ever come to me so naturally as technical writing; the field was a perfect match for someone who majored in math and English.

This thought that I am semi-scientific rather than richly imaginative led to the idea of Googling creativity for scientific minds, which led me to: How to Train Your Creative Brain, which led me to: A Technique for Producing Ideas, by James Webb Young. Gold mine. I need a deliberate methodology for cultivating creativity because while flashes of insight and imagination come to me, I want to go deeper and I want to have some control over it. If I am analytical, how can I use that quality in the service of my art?IMG_6806

I put together this from A Technique for Producing Ideas. This book is about advertising, which is a highly applied form of creativity. I translated the book to writing fiction this way:

  • Ideas — ideas for plot and character
  • Product — whatever the characters do for a living and the setting or other element that plays a big role in the book
  • Consumers — readers

Here is a longish quote from the shortish book:

We constantly talk about the importance of having an intimate knowledge of the product and the consumer, but in fact we seldom work at it.

This I suppose is because a real knowledge of a product, and of people in relation to it, is not easy to come by. Getting it is something like the process which was recommended to De Maupassant  as the way to learn to write. “Go out into the streets of Paris,” he was told by an older writer, “and pick out a cab driver. He will look to you very much like every other cab driver. But study him until you can describe him so that he is seen in your description to be an individual, different from every other cab driver in the world.”

This is the real meaning of that trite talk about getting an intimate knowledge of a product and its consumers. Most of us stop too soon in the process of getting it. If the surface differences are not striking we assume that there are no differences. But if we go deeply enough, or far enough, we nearly always find that between every product and some consumers there is an individuality of relationship which may lead to an idea.*

Another book I read in December had a major impact on my writing: Freedom, by Jonathan Franzen. So I looked him up and found this quote which captures what is so genius about Freedom and which ties in neatly to what James Webb Young said:

…if you pay careful enough attention to a character’s inner life, it turns out to be a marvelously detailed mirror of the character’s outer world.**

Here’s another quote from a book that is playing into my new methodology of creativity (The Plot Thickens, by Noah Lukeman):

…it is the purpose of this book to show that plot is not just about having a single great idea; on the contrary, a good plot is an amalgamation of many ideas or elements of writing, including characterization, journey, suspense, conflict, and context. An idea is paramount but without the supporting elements, an idea by itself is just that — an idea, not a 124 or 300 page living being replete with shades, colors, and textures. Most stories do not come in one flash — on the contrary, the best stories or are organic to their characters, to their layers of suspense and conflict.***

Creativity and imagination can be cultivated. Stay tuned for Part II on how I employed the methods and the results.

A Technique for Producing Ideas, by James Webb Young

**http://www.theguardian.com/books/2015/oct/02/jonathan-franzen-writing-freedom?CMP=share_btn_tw

***The Plot Thickens, by Noah Lukeman

Christmas where I am

Today I did something I found I really like to do and that is to go shooting with a friend. Anne from Slow Shutter Speed was in town and we scheduled to go out together. It was raining, something about which we Californians do not complain. I figured it would be best to shoot indoors! We could have done a museum, but it’s Christmas. What better time to take photos in a hotel lobby? So we headed to the San Jose Fairmont hotel. We were not disappointed. They did a wonderful job for their guests.

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I was quite enthralled with the ice skaters. Here are two shots.

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And a video showing the skaters in action.

Anne taught me how to do an abstract photo.

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That’s the Christmas tree with an abstract effect.

Another mission was to get something for the final holiday themed Monochrome Madness on Leanne Cole’s blog. Here is what I’ll be sending in.

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I’d forgotten about Christmas in the Park, a massive display put on in San Jose. Local businesses donate and decorate all the trees, and some make elaborate settings. Here are some of those.

There are two or three days of shopping left for Christmas. I used the whole weekend, and I’ll need to do a bit more after Christmas for a late celebration with some family, but it’s done. I think. Tomorrow I’ll wrap and see if I need to buy more. It’s crazy, but I enjoyed it. I had fun with other shoppers and chatted with them a bit. The best part about today was seeing parents with children showing them the wonders of Christmas, especially the very young ones at the Fairmont. I took a picture for one couple with their two little ones, in front of one of the trees. Yes, it’s a commercial effort, but people are behind it too, and I know there is a lot of pride behind the work as well as joy in knowing the delight that children will have.

Have a good week. I hope you get some time off!

 

#Giveaway Australian literature & sale

Ebook Heartland 2015

As many of you know, I did the editing and formatting for my friend John Holland’s four novellas. Now there’s a collection of all four in one book and it’s on sale today. There is also a one month long giveaway of the paperback edition on Goodreads for USA residents (due to budget constraints with shipping).

If you read it and see the editor is Nia Simone, don’t worry, that’s me!

Here is the description:

Heartland is a collection of four novellas connected by the theme of life in the Australian outback.

Somewhere Far from Iris:

In this noir style tale, a depressed man seeking to heal himself by returning to his hometown walks into an explosive situation that threatens friends old and new and is somehow entangled with the secret of his origin.

The Light at the Bottom of the Garden:

In this light mystery, Senior Police Constable Mick Creedy faces his toughest case: a governess gone missing, perhaps because she followed the legendary Min-Min Lights. When the young woman’s mother, Eveling, arrives from England wanting a full investigation, including into the possibility of a paranormal event, Mick needs to balance his no-nonsense methods with a grieving parent’s needs. Eveling further complicates matters as she endangers herself and threatens to distract Mick.

Bitter Bread:

In this noir-style story, a severely scarred reclusive man who moves to a small town after his wife’s death finds himself embroiled in a violent labour dispute that forces him to become involved with the community.

Left of the Rising Sun:

In this survival adventure, a boy who is the only one to walk away from a small plane crash in the remote outback of the Australian Northern Territory believes he won’t be found and decides to walk 300 kilometres home. His trek requires resolve, knowledge of the harsh wilderness, and ingenuity and leads to surprising friendship and maturity.

 

Goodreads Book Giveaway

Heartland by John  Holland

Heartland

by John Holland

Giveaway ends January 17, 2016.

See the giveaway details
at Goodreads.

Enter Giveaway

For today only, the digital edition is on sale at these outlets:

Amazon: http://amzn.to/1NQpg5M

Kobo: https://store.kobobooks.com/en-us/ebook/heartland-38

iTunes:

Nook: http://www.barnesandnoble.com/w/heartland-john-holland/1122933938?ean=2940152459661

Smashwords:  https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/591821

Find John online here: http://poetrysansfrontieres.weebly.com/

9 shopping days and huge sale

Happy Monday. Nine shopping days remain before Christmas. I have a long way to go. I haven’t even done our cards yet. Fortunately, I did get on top of things in time to mail gifts to my Australian family, and the presents arrived there today.

As for the holiday cards, I’ve pulled together some photos, but there is a tiny problem. I was so into photography this year but I didn’t take pictures of my husband and I on our travels, and that’s what we always put on our cards. This is going to take some work to find some selfies or else I’ll have to use Photoshop.

Speaking of photos, my mother-in-law just gave me a good hint. She wants photos of her grandson’s wedding. I’m going to create a photo book for her from Snapfish. I love those, and I think she will, too.

Oh wow, I just signed into Snapfish and books are on sale for 67% off! Today is the last day. So I have to hurry and do this post so you have time to snag the deal. The coupon code is 999BOOK.

There is a lot of snow in the Sierras. I skied yesterday and today, and let me tell you, it felt really good to get out of my writing chair and move! I didn’t take any photos, but I will tomorrow. It is supposed to be sunny, which will make for pretty photos.

I wanted to share these two images with you. One is a view of the Sierras from Nevada, and the other is from a butterfly collection on permanent display in the Truckee Recreation Center. It’s an awesome collection, although it is sad to me that the butterflies have to die to be collected. It’s not something I would choose to do, yet I admired the tenacity of the collector. She worked on it for about 30 years starting in the late 1800s. I should have written down her name. I’ll get it on the next visit.

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Snow in the Sierras

Happy Friday.

I was in a snow storm last night, well sort of. I was looking out the window of a high rise hotel in Reno Nevada at this beautiful snow falling on a railroad yard. It’s hard to photograph falling snow, but you can see it in the lights. Okay, the snow floating in front is WordPress snow, I’m talking about the snow in the photo, LOL!

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I have a lot of writing to do, but I’m going to start tomorrow. Tonight I’m tired, so I’m going to read.

How is your Christmas/holiday shopping going? I have done a little. Next week is going to be busy.

Here’s what the mountains looked like today.

 

Editing and themes

Do you have  goals? Do you resist your goals?

I go through phases when I resist my goals. Right now, though, I am on a roll, checking things off my great project management master list. Right now I’m feeling very energized because I finished the next step in Third Strike’s the Charm, the second edit.

Here’s a writing tip I just recorded for myself in a new document called Process. Process is another topic. I’ll do that soon. But this was just something I learned during second edits that I wanted to share.

I decided to go ahead and read the manuscript backwards. I usually reserve that step for the galleys. However, with my publisher, when you have the galleys, the manuscript is locked down in a PDF and you cannot make changes to it directly. You have to give the line number, the error, and the correction. You have to type that all up. I figured it would behoove me to go ahead and do my very detailed proofreading now while I can make big changes directly in the manuscript.

I expected to find typos, grammatical errors, that kind of thing. I did. However, I also noticed story element things. I had a small thematic element that I had not revisited and two minor plot points that would be nice to revisit as well. I’m excited because I feel that rounding off these elements will provide a more satisfying and richer experience for the reader.

I don’t know why reading it backwards did that, but I think the process keeps your mind alert. Any time I read a sentence but realized I had spaced out, I stopped and read it again and again and again until I was concentrating again. So I was really keeping my mind alert. I did about 12 pages a day.

Reading forward, you miss things because you’re caught up in the story. You’ve read it so many times by now that your mind is filling in what should be there.

Theme has been interesting in this book for me as well and what I learned was that there can be more than one theme. I had a theme that I consciously developed and two smaller themes for one of the characters that I  almost didn’t develop. One of my critique partners noticed that one of them hadn’t been developed enough. And the other very small one I caught on the reverse read.

My takeaway tip for this is to watch for themes when you are doing a careful read-through of the manuscript. You might find some minor or even major themes or seeds of themes lurking in the text. If so, find ways to weave the themes through in more places or to at least complete on them one time.

Theme is really important. If you are a writer, what do you think about theme? If you are a reader but not a writer, do you notice themes in books?

I’m listening to Freedom by Jonathan Franzen now. Okay, the theme is freedom. I’m 7 discs in and I’m starting to feel the hits on Freedom, and oh it’s glorious. One place to look for your theme is in the title.

My process seems to include this kind of amorphous big picture feeling about the book when I start, and oftentimes I have the title, which suggests the theme. But executing the theme? Yeah, it doesn’t happen in the first draft. Some seeds get planted though. And those were the seeds I noticed in second edits and realized I hadn’t grown.

Here are some photos from an outdoor shopping mall near me where I met a friend for coffee. Nighttime is sure to be more spectacular when the swans are lit against a background of darkness, but I do like the elegant shapes, the Italian style background, the bows, poinsettias and wreathes. Enjoy.

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Motivation in writing and San Diego

Happy Monday. What do you have planned this week? I am working on final edits for Third Strike’s the Charm and once that’s done, I’m going back to my special project. I won’t have it completed for NaNo, but at least I wrote 30,000 words!

Do you find you have to juggle goals based on other demands or simply motivation? What about creative goals? Do you fight it if the excitement isn’t there?

I have found that if I don’t want to work on a project, it’s often okay if I don’t because everything always gets done. I prefer to be in the flow and allow my inner rhythm to guide me when I’m writing. I’m inherently goal oriented, so I’m able to work that way. Even when I had a day job, I could work on things when I felt like working on them. There’s a distinction, though. I actually enjoy some of the more tedious work, it’s the creative work that is more difficult, and I prefer to do that when I’m inspired and excited. So I would work on all the routine stuff when I wasn’t inspired and work on the really hard stuff when I was. However, just like with writing fiction, when there was a deadline, I had to push myself, and it could be very unpleasant, working all night and racing against time. I don’t work all night now, but I used to have to do that a lot when I was a technical writer. When I was a project manager at the end of that career, I didn’t have my own “deliverables” and so didn’t have to pull all-nighters.

There are times when I have to push myself to get a story done. In fact, right now, I’m floating along on a magic carpet, feeling happy and light, but I have to remind myself of the intense stress and hard work I had to go through to get Third Strike’s the Charm written and submitted on time. So many times I didn’t think I was going to pull it off. So many times I pushed myself to work every waking hour. I didn’t want to let down my critique partners, especially one of them, who had put in a huge amount of work to help me after she told me the first draft didn’t work as it was. (She was right.)

I also didn’t want to let down my husband. I told him this after I had completed the book. He said I wouldn’t have let him down and not to ever worry about that. But I probably still will worry about that too.

Wow, in writing this post, I’m realizing again that what motivates me is other people. That was true at my day job too. Not wanting to let people down is what spurs me to work extraordinarily hard. Otherwise, I float along on my magic carpet, dreaming and enjoying, until I really have to land back down there on earth and perform or somebody is going to be disappointed.

My preference is to get things done because I want to get them done and to experience mostly joy along the way. I think the key for that is not having too many external deadlines. I still have to find that balance of learning to push myself hard when the going is not easy. That is a matter of holding myself to my own deadline and not letting myself down. I look forward to learning this new ability to push myself out of choice.

What motivates you to perform at your peak?

Here are some photos from San Diego. I took this first one at the end of my photo shoot. This surfer stood here for a long time, just looking at the sunset. I love how he reveled in the moment, how he appreciated the natural beauty. This man inspired me so much more than all the people who stare at their phones, including me. (I’m trying to break that habit.)

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Surfer at Scripps Pier La Jolla
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Church of Latter Day Saints temple in La Jolla
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Me…dreaming
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University City San Diego

And here is a gallery for you. PS I’m saving my best photo for my monthly newsletter, which goes out tonight. So if you’re not already signed up, just click on the link above (monthly newsletter). That will take you to the form. I’d love to have you as a subscriber. You’ll get a recipe and be entered in a giveaway each month, plus see a unique piece of art in medium resolution.