An Ugly Duckling story: book review, Poor Man’s Orange, Ruth Park

This book was recommended to me and I read it without having read its predecessors, (Missus and The Harp in the South) in the trilogy. Poor Man’s Orange is an Australian novel first published in 1949.
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In Poor Man’s Orange, we start off right in the middle of the family. The style has a slice-of-life feel. And it’s subtle. I didn’t know who the hero and heroine were for a long time.

Charlie’s transformation is so fantastic. I hate these lazily written books where the hero just has a sudden thought that he loves her and so he’ll be totally different now and become the man we want the heroine to marry.

No! Prove it to me. And Park does. How she does!

Charlie’s fall to the bottom is like a bungee jump in slow motion. We get to agonize for pages and chapters about whether that rope is going to be the right length. Or will he slam headfirst into despair and ruin as do so many people in the slum?

The slum, by the way, achieves that to which all writers either aspire or should aspire, an environment so alive, so vibrant in its detailed reality that it rises to the level of a character in its own right.

What Park does, not by standing on a soapbox and waving a finger as she lectures us about not judging the poor for being dirty, but by showing us the absolute impossibility of keeping a clean house when you are impoverished. Mumma is burdened and defeated by filth, Roie destroyed by it. Dolour fights it, but of course she cannot defeat it. The most Dolour ever accomplishes is cleaning one small corner. The way Dolour manages to escape the grip of filth cannot be to overcome it because that would defeat the author’s purpose of showing how impossible it is to defeat dirt when you are poor. Park manages to keep Dolour above it, not of it, by having Dolour turn away from it, to show us the unconquerable cleanliness of her spirit. But the inevitability of dirt reigns supreme in this book. The slum never gets cleaner, never improves, never changes, even as it is about to be wrecked.

The leveling planned for the neighborhood is for the benefit of the land owners and developers, not the poor inhabitants. They will all go somewhere even worse, the elderly shunted off to die prematurely from stress as the homes they spent a lifetime in are knocked down in minutes.

The resurrection and triumph of the hero is brilliant. Even as Charlie almost falls into the miasma of sin that Dolour feels swirls everywhere around her, ready to suck her and anyone who becomes weak into it, the reader sympathizes with him for the reader has lived through his reasons with him.

And then his transformation. Park earns it. At the end — no — I’m not really going to tell you the end. But Charlie’s transformation, wow. You get it. You can believe it.

Park also builds character by showing, again through a poignant scene, what Dolour admires. Or, to be more precise, who Dolour admires. The nuns who maintain inner tranquility and order, holding themselves bulwarks against chaos. I love the bit about Dolour and her friends wondering what the nuns take in their small travel valises, which represent the sum total of their worldly possessions. Park uses this as a way to show again, as she shows multifariously throughout the novel, the romantic sensibility of the heroine. In this scene, what Dolour imagines in the sisters’ valises is romantic, by contrast to the cynical guesses of her friends.

The crowning glory on this book was the subtle revelation only at the end that it followed The Ugly Duckling story archetype.

De Oude Kerk (The Old Church), Amsterdam

First, here’s some info about the church, from their website:

The Old Church

The Old Church is in the heart of Amsterdam right on the ramparts. It is the oldest building in the city and was founded by fishermen on the river Amstel. Around 1300 there was erected a stone church, dedicated to St. Nicholas. This church would become the imposing medieval monument that exists today.

The Old Church not only serves as a place of worship but also as a concert hall, wedding venue and exhibition and reception area. It is the living room of Amsterdam. That’s always been the case: Fishermen repaired their nets here, played the organ, and Sweelinck and Rembrandt went here to marry. Generations of Amsterdam residents, including the naval hero Van Heemskerck, are buried in this European monument.

De Oude Kerk interior
De Oude Kerk interior

Our experience in May 2013

We were walking, of course, as we walked so much in Amsterdam (afraid of getting in a bike crash) that I ended up with tendinitis in my hip at the end. On this sightseeing adventure, I was in front, picking my way around some construction work being done on the paving stones outside the church, and behind me, my husband was being propositioned by a “lady of the night.” Does that moniker still apply during the day? Well, you know what I mean. Now, this is a man who takes pretty much everything in stride, but he was startled enough to catch up and tell me what happened. His eyes were pretty huge! The lady in question managed to do this without me catching on. Pretty clever.

The church is right next to the red light district, we discovered.

The World Press Photo laureates from Russia and the Soviet Union were on display. These photos were fascinating and some of them were disturbing, as photojournalism can and should be, bringing to light experiences of people around the world, both positive and negative.

The church itself is amazing. You look at these tombstones on the floor and know that beneath them are people who lived in Amsterdam hundreds of years ago. And you think about their lives.

the tombstone from 1813
The tombstone from 1613
tombstone 1621
Tombstone from 1621, Oude Kerk, Amsterdam

That was a lot of death, so here are some thrilling photos of life at its best from the Photo Laureates, Wei Zheng and Yongzhi Chu:

Wei Zheng, China, 3rd Prize Sports Action Singles, A member of the Australian synchronized swimming team competes at the Olympic Games in London, on  10 August.
Wei Zheng, China, 3rd Prize Sports Action Singles, A member of the Australian synchronized swimming team competes at the Olympic Games in London, on 10 August.
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Yongzhi Chu, China, 2nd Prize Sports Action Singles, Young gymnasts warm up at a juvenile sports school in Jiaxing, Zhejiang, China.

Looking at these photojournalism masterpieces reminds me of Leanne Cole’s post yesterday in which she discusses art and photography. I highly recommend it: What is Art?

The cover is here!

My first published story is getting closer to being on the virtual shelves. The cover came in a couple days ago.

My first book cover
My first book cover

The cover artists were one of the biggest reasons I went with The Wild Rose Press. During the publishing process, you fill out a form called Cover Art Sheets. In this you explain the premise, give links to covers you like, any design suggestions, and you say what the most important element is. I detailed out two alternate covers with a lot of instructions and even did a mock up of a cover. My critique partner (CP) asked with some amusement (she’s pubb’d with WRP), how much of my suggestions were used. Answer: none. Ha ha! Except for “the most important element,” which I said was the hot FBI agent.

The heroine on the cover looks contemporary. At first I was like, “Wait! I didn’t describe that outfit.” The intelligent people I surround myself with quickly pointed out the obvious. Yeah, Angela Anderson saved me from myself. I’m so happy with the cover.

You know, for a long time, I didn’t want to be published. When I announced this to one of my writing friends, she said, “I don’t know what to do with that.”  She had already fixed me up by helping me see my slump-du-jour might be because I didn’t like the story I was working on, letting me know I could just set it aside and move on. We don’t have to finish everything we start. But then I came out with that comment.

Not wanting to be published sounds crazy, but to me, when I looked at people who were published, it didn’t look fun to me. At the time, I had a demanding job, and being a published author looked like a lot more pressure and work and no fun. But I watched my CP’s experience with The Wild Rose Press for a couple years. Her experience looked SO FUN!!!! She even went to an author retreat at a ranch in Texas! (I get to go to the next one, next year. Very excited.) Her editor was nice. Tough but nice, encouraging. They got back to her. They were organized. Then she received her first cover and wow. Now it’s happening to me.

In conclusion, getting published with The Wild Rose Press is FUN!

Saratoga Eats! Food truck event June 14, 2013

Intero Real Estate company in Saratoga did a great job sponsoring Saratoga Eats yesterday, opening their offices to offer clean bathrooms, setting up music for the kids to dance to, and advertising  ahead of time with big signs strategically placed around town.

It’s neat to see this new business model giving opportunities to entrepreneurs!  Not to mention offering fun new dining options for foodies everywhere.

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It’s not as easy as it looks. Some trucks you can tell, they decided to turn Mom’s amazing cooking into a business. But, let’s face it, Mom has a touch of memory loss and Dad and Kid don’t quite have a handle on the assembly line aspect of cranking out meals. (No names mentioned; they will hopefully get better.)

The trucks that took their time to get the order right, who had pre-made items that just needed to be cooked, that knew their inventory status, and took their time when handing you the order for things like: “Would you like me to put foil on the bottom dish so you can stack them?” “Do you want me to pour the sauce on it here?” Did better. For all of these traits, and incredible quality and taste, we give two thumbs up to Wesushi.

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Fast action at Wesushi
Fast action at Wesushi
Cooking up a storm at Wesushi
Cooking up a storm at Wesushi
Sushi truck menu
Wesushi menu

Our favorite items from Wesushi, in order of preference. (If you have to just get one, get Sekiwake.)

Sekiwake

Lobster crunch

Also with great service and amazing taste, two thumbs up to Midday Picnic, for the killer shrimp and chorizo slider. (Comes as a mini sand with slaw to die for.) Yup, it slides right down — after tantalizing the taste buds.

Midday Picnic truck Midday Picnic menu

Purples of Amsterdam

This photo of Lilies is out of focus, but this masterpiece is the first thing you see when you enter the Van Gogh Museum in Amsterdam. The close ups came out better and show the brush strokes. The explanation is handy. The Van Gogh Museum does an outstanding job explaining every aspect of Van Gogh, including the science of studying and verifying his paintings. His influences are interesting as well. This museum makes a lot of knowledge accessible.

Irises by Van Gogh

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Close up of Irises by Van Gogh
Close up of Irises by Van Gogh
Reproduction sof Van Gogh's palette for The Irises
Reproduction of Van Gogh’s palette for The Irises
Close up of Irises by Van Gogh 2
Close up of Irises by Van Gogh 2